Narrating through the senses
Legendary Brands, Unleasing the Power of Storyetlling to Ceate a Winning Market Strategy, by Laurence Vincent. Published by Dearborn Trade Publishing, 2002. ISBN 0-7931-5560-6, pages 145-146
Don't say "he was terribly hungry"
The Scene Book, A Primer for the Fiction Writer, by Sandra Scofield. Published by Penguin Books. 2007 ISBN 978-0-14-303826-9. pages 111, 112
Show, Don't Tell
The Scene Book, A Primer for the Fiction Writer, by Sandra Scofield. Published by Penguin Books. 2007 ISBN 978-0-14-303826-9. page 120
Good Writing Appeals to the Senses
The Scene Book, A Primer for the Fiction Writer, by Sandra Scofield. Published by Penguin Books. 2007 ISBN 978-0-14-303826-9. page 120
Elaborating Sentences
The Scene Book, A Primer for the Fiction Writer, by Sandra Scofield. Published by Penguin Books. 2007 ISBN 978-0-14-303826-9. pages 121
The Primary Image
The Scene Book, A Primer for the Fiction Writer, by Sandra Scofield. Published by Penguin Books. 2007 ISBN 978-0-14-303826-9. pages 121, 122